From The Ruins of a Personality
I feel the sadness....
Succinct and powerful lines.
a poem to be felt...so much in so few words..
Beautifully written..
Full of emotion, albeit so economically expressed.
Oh so sad... the growing all alone. It happens to everyone, yet unique for all.
Dads are loved & their absence is sad...
You have evoked so much feeling here..very powerful
Powerfully emotive writing in such a small frame of words.
I feel the sadness....
ReplyDeleteSuccinct and powerful lines.
ReplyDeletea poem to be felt...so much in so few words..
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written..
ReplyDeleteFull of emotion, albeit so economically expressed.
ReplyDeleteOh so sad... the growing all alone. It happens to everyone, yet unique for all.
ReplyDeleteDads are loved & their absence is sad...
ReplyDeleteYou have evoked so much feeling here..very powerful
ReplyDeletePowerfully emotive writing in such a small frame of words.
ReplyDelete