Sunday 14 August 2016

Correction

Words, giving vision,
like lenses for myopia
      -- Dad,
without whom life is
a blur, in his writing.

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9 comments:

  1. Mary15 August 2016 at 11:32

    I feel the sadness....

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  2. Sherry Blue Sky15 August 2016 at 11:53

    Succinct and powerful lines.

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  3. Sumana Roy15 August 2016 at 16:13

    a poem to be felt...so much in so few words..

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  4. Sanaa Rizvi15 August 2016 at 18:07

    Beautifully written..

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  5. Rosemary Nissen-Wade15 August 2016 at 18:51

    Full of emotion, albeit so economically expressed.

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  6. brudberg15 August 2016 at 18:59

    Oh so sad... the growing all alone. It happens to everyone, yet unique for all.

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  7. Anita Sabat15 August 2016 at 19:26

    Dads are loved & their absence is sad...

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  8. Jae Rose15 August 2016 at 20:59

    You have evoked so much feeling here..very powerful

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  9. Julian16 August 2016 at 05:13

    Powerfully emotive writing in such a small frame of words.

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